from: Harry Duggnington
to: Jenny McCabe
date: 8/8/20
subject: kitchen recycling
this is just a general review over the situation
1. I have found that the bins are mostly being used correctly, but the food isn't emptied as often as it should be and the kitchen becomes quite smelly at times.
2. Most of the staff members are taking this new recycling system quite well, but some of the staff members are thinking the recycling system is a waste of time but they still follow the rules.
3.finally, there is confusion on what types of plastics are recyclable.
in conclusion, I think things mostly stay the same but we need to make it so the cleaner or staff members take out the food bin more often. We should also have of some sort of chart explaining what plastics are recyclable or not.
Kind regards,
Harry Duggington
Great proofreading! Your sentences are all correct. :)
ReplyDeleteHave a look at the memo format. You want to include a brief introduction, a few bullet points, and conclusion. Don't forget capitals -- "Kind regards" and the first word in the subject line.
Great work :) ka rawe